under your picture window
overlooking the highway
that turns at the lights
and winds north out of town
your son was in the laundry basket
or upside-down on the couch
or in the chair, feet on ears
my sister watched him
like it was the last time
i didn't want to touch you
or i would cry
but i'm no buddhist --
i'm going to feel this --
so i did
and i do,
and i will,
but this is getting old
this saying good-bye
this praying see you soon
your eyes brimmed with light
as my feet shuffled down your porch
the paper towel blew off
the food you gave me
i snatched it back
Bethany,
ReplyDeleteYour words are beautiful.
-Mel
but i'm no buddhist --
ReplyDelete'i'm going to feel this --
so i did
and i do,
and i will,
but this is getting old
this saying good-bye
this praying see you soon'
i keep being the one leaving...this expresses so well and beautiful...how sweet of you to write for Leah:)
What a sweet dedication! The way you have strung your words together here is lovely!
ReplyDeleteThis is truly lovely through and through Bethany!
ReplyDeleteaw heart stirring write to your friend...cant snatch her back... : (
ReplyDeleteLoved this...I HATE saying goodbye to those I love.
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming by my place and for you kind comment.
Elizabeth
http://www.justfollowingjesus.com
painfully beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous. I've said goodbye way too many times, and it's so easy to lose the heart you show here. But you are so so so right in what you wrote.
ReplyDeleteoh bethany, this: it reminds me of our goodbye, the one in the summer, and then, how natural it felt to see you again in winter, as if i hadn't even left...
ReplyDeletei've been missing you this week though.
i long for heaven when all of our leahs and bethanys and emilys will be together.
Have felt these emotions with goodbyes to dear ones. Beautiful words.
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