Saturday, August 27, 2011

giant maple

at eventide the old maple
sighed, stretching
shadow toes
across
the
cool
grass















i climbed that giant until
my own shadow
sprawled soft
among
leaves
down
below















and three dirty rascals
begged their way
to conquest:
kings
of
this
castle















whilst sunset crowned
the true champion
beneath our giant,
smiling
with
eyes
upturned



















brian miller's post still has me thinking trees.
emily's been meditating about wheat.

6 comments:

  1. I could live on that first phrase alone. Sigh. LOVE.

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  2. smiles. this is a lovely verse...and love playing in the trees....smiling with eyes upturned...hey that is me today...

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  3. what you did with a tree, and a camera, and sunshine, and verse – creating a kingdom - having it rise and fall - just 100% full wisdom and whimsy. I hearted it – thank you for it. And God bless and keep you and each and every one of yours Bethany Ann.

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  4. i don't think i've ever actually climbed a tree. i think i might need to rectify that!!! love this, bethany ann....

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  5. I really truly liked reading this.
    I enjoyed the photos...they brought the true feeling of climbing and sun.
    I loved the idea of the climb..which there is nothing on this planet that compares!
    Good piece.
    T

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  6. oooh, shadow toes... and the photos! bethany this is gorgeous. xoxo

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